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20 April 2008 @ 08:40 am
I'll Stand Right Beside You Chapter Eleven  
Title: I’ll Stand Right Beside You
Author: Star star55
Part: 11/13
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Pairing: Danny/Dougie, Harry/Tom, Matt/James
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Summary: Life throws in the most unexpected situations, testing and challenging you. You can make it through knowing that someone will be right beside you…
A/N: This is The long awaited sequel to The Heart Never Lies. I have had a lot of fun writing this! I am glad it is done and I can start on the third part!!
This fic is entirely dedicated to Emma: orpheous87 because she beta-ed this book and the first one. Emma, you are brilliant *hugs tight*
Disclaimer: Not mine *sigh* this never happened…

You need to have read The Heart Never Lies for this story to make sense. Read it (and comment!) if you haven’t yet.

Prologue | One | Two | Three | Four | Five | Six | Seven | Eight | Nine | Ten

Chapter 11
With You

“Planning a wedding is much harder than it looks, you know?” Harry grumbled as he and Danny walked along the shopping mall before heading into yet another shop that Tom wanted them to go into.

Danny chuckled. “I have no doubt about it,” he said as Harry looked down at his list of things that Tom needed for the rehearsal dinner that was going to be held in two weeks time.

Harry frowned as he scanned the shelves and picked out a few things, passing them to Danny for him to hold. Danny put each item in the complimentary basket that he had picked up from the front entrance of the store. Harry handed him a salt and pepper shaker and Danny had to chuckle.

“Don’t you have this stuff already, mate?” he asked.

Harry nodded. “Apparently we need new ones,” he replied with a roll of his eyes. “Anyway, I’m almost done then we can go for a beer or something.”

Danny let out a small sigh of relief. “Good, this shopping stuff is beginning to make me not want to get married.”

Harry chuckled. “You’ll be fine with Dougie; he wants a small garden wedding, nothing like what Tom wants. I swear I may as well have been straight and be marrying a woman.”

“Wait, how do you know that Dougie wants a garden wedding? How come I don’t know that?” Danny asked.

“You didn’t know?” Harry raised an eyebrow in his direction.

Danny shook his head. “No, I didn’t know,” he said. “How did you know?”

“Dougie and I talked about it one night when you and Tom were out,” Harry said nonchalantly. “He said he’s always wanted to get married in a park or in a nice garden. I can’t believe he never told you.”

Danny felt a little hurt at this realisation and he followed Harry to the check out counter. He put the basket down and emptied it as the cashier rang up each item.

They made their way to the car and loaded the bags into the boot, closing it tightly. Danny leant against the boot and folded his arms across his chest.

“Danny, you’re seriously not sulking over this, are you?” Harry asked coming to stand in front of him.

“Maybe,” Danny muttered.


“I thought I knew everything about Dougie, about what he wanted and all those little details,” Danny said.

“Dan, c’mon,” Harry started. “I still don’t know everything about Tom and we’ve been together forever.”

“This is different,” Danny said. “He was my best friend before he was my boyfriend. I just thought we had no secrets.”

Harry chuckled and took Danny’s hand in his own. “It’s hardly a secret,” he said. “And you don’t have secrets from each other. I’ve never known a couple that was as open with each other apart from Tom and me.”

Danny nodded. “I’m being stupid, aren’t I?” he said after a while.

“Just a little,” Harry grinned. “C’mon, let’s get that beer.”

Danny pushed himself off the boot and hugged Harry tightly. Danny took a deep breath and mentally shook his head at himself for being so silly. He knew he and Dougie had no secrets from each other, he wasn’t sure why this got to him like it did.

“Thanks,” Danny said as they parted.

“No worries.” Their lips met in a soft kiss and Danny’s relaxed a little more.


Danny and Harry parted and looked around to see who had called out. They saw a group of three boys around their age, possibly younger looking at them with hatred.

“Harry, ignore it,” Danny said grabbing Harry’s wrist.

Harry looked thoroughly pissed off and Danny dragged him around to get in the car. He got in his side and started the car and reversed out of the slot. One of the teens threw a can of drink at his car as it drove away.

Danny growled under his breath and Harry swore loudly and turned around in his seat to glare at the 3 teens.

“You should have stopped,” Harry muttered darkly.

“What would that have achieved?” Danny said eyes flicking to Harry. “It would have just resulted in a lot of swearing and possibly bloodshed.”

“The little fuckers need to know they can’t go around abusing us like that.”

“Harry, I know this,” Danny said indicating to turn right. “And they’ll piss off the wrong person one day and get thumped for it but that isn’t for us to do.”

Harry grumbled again and Danny parked his car.

“C’mon, we’ll have a beer and relax,” Danny said. “Forget all about those kids and enjoy ourselves for a bit.”

One hour and a beer each later, they were making their way back to their street. Danny helped Harry take all of the shopping inside his house before leaving to go back to his own place.

Danny couldn’t hear a thing as he entered the house and he wondered if his partner was home. He made his way up the stairs and found Dougie staring at a painting in the middle of the floor. The drop sheets covered the carpet and Dougie’s paints were at his feet.

The blonde had his arms folded over his chest and he was staring intently at the painting.

“Hey,” Danny said softly.

Dougie jumped and turned to face him. “Hi,” he said flatly.

“Dougs?” Danny frowned. “Is everything okay?”

“Peachy,” Dougie replied and he pulled the canvas off his easel and turned it so Danny couldn’t see it. He put it in the corner and pushed past Danny to exit the room.

“Dougie,” Danny called after him. “What’s wrong?”

“Nothing,” Dougie said. He was in the bathroom, shirtless, washing his hands of his painting mess.

Danny stood in the door frame. “There obviously is something wrong,” he said. “What happened?”

Dougie said nothing and pushed passed Danny again. Danny again followed him to their bedroom this time.

“Dougie, please,” Danny said. “What’s going on? You’re scaring me.”

“Just leave it, Danny,” Dougie said sharply.

“Leave what? You haven’t even told me what’s wrong!”

Dougie crushed their lips together in a bruising kiss and walked away. “I’m going out for a bit. I need to be alone.”

Danny stared wide eyed after his lover and wondered what the hell had just happened. He stood against the wall just outside of his and Dougie’s room and tired to comprehend what had gone wrong.

After a few minutes, Danny flashed back to the painting Dougie had been staring at and he wandered to Dougie’s art room. He didn’t look at Dougie’s art unless the blonde allowed him to, he felt like he was prying otherwise but this was an emergency.

He turned the painting to face him and he frowned at it. It was a painting of broken shards of a mirror and Dougie’s face seemed to stare up at him from each shard. There was something in the background of the painting and Danny couldn’t make out what it was. He sighed heavily and set the painting back down. That didn’t tell him much at all.


Over the next few days, Dougie was a little out of sorts. He apologised for storming out on Danny but still didn’t offer any explanation for why he did it and that hurt Danny more than he cared to realise.

They spent more time with Tom and Harry, helping to plan their wedding and Dougie acted normally in front of them. Each time Danny went to ask his lover to open up to him Dougie shut him out that little bit more and Danny’s heart broke.

He couldn’t understand what was happening to make Dougie feel like this and he just wanted to know to make him feel better – to try and fix it even. He hated being shut out especially when they had always been so close.

Tom’s laughter filled his ears as he and Dougie were playing with the figurines that were going on top of Tom and Harry’s wedding cake. Natalie was an enthusiastic helper while Harry, Riley and Danny sat off to the side watching them.

“What’s up with Dougie?” Riley asked.

Danny sighed. “I have no idea,” he said quietly.

Riley shifted in her seat and faced him. “You don’t know?” she asked.

Danny shook his head. “No, he’s been like this for the last week and I can’t get him to talk to me,” he replied.

“Maybe he doesn’t need you to talk to him, maybe he just needs to know you’re there for him,” Harry said.

“He does know,” Danny sighed. “I’ve told him so many times that I don’t need to know what is going on as long as he knows he can talk to me if he needs to.”

The trio sat silently and watched on as their respective partners went over the details of the wedding plans.

Danny heaved a sigh and stood. “I’m going for a walk,” he said to no one in particular.

He grabbed his jacket and walked out the door, needing to get away, feeling claustrophobic in the house where his lover couldn’t even talk to him.

Danny bit back the tears that threatened to fall and kept his head down as he walked briskly down the street. He didn’t know where he was going, he just knew he needed to get out, clear his head and convince himself that Dougie did still love him.

After an hour or so, Danny sat down on a park bench and drew his knees up to his chest. He swallowed thickly and closed his eyes, trying to will the world away.

He had tried to tell Dougie so many times that they could be open and tell each other anything. He vowed that he would always love the blonde and wondered why it was so hard for him to open this time when it was so easy all of the other times.


Danny looked up and saw Dougie hovering over him. “What?” he half snapped.

“Okay, I deserved that,” Dougie said softly and sat down next to him on the bench.

Danny kept his head down and his gaze averted from Dougie, not wanting to look at him for the fear of snapping or breaking down into tears. The latter seemed the most likely at the moment, he thought to himself.

After a while, Dougie reached out and took Danny’s hand in his own and he kissed it softly.

“I’m sorry,” he whispered.

Danny looked over at his boyfriend and nodded. Dougie’s lips closed over his in a soft kiss. Danny relaxed into the kiss and shifted to hold Dougie in his arms.

“What happened?” he asked after a few moments.

“Two things,” Dougie whispered. “One I can’t say but the other is that Justin came back into town and wanted to make amends with Jazzie.”

“Why didn’t you tell me?” Danny asked shocked.

“I – I don’t know,” Dougie replied honestly. “I just got so angry and I shut you out. I’m sorry, Dan, I just couldn’t deal with it.”

Danny gave Dougie’s hand a squeeze.

“He almost raped my baby sister and he tried to waltz back into her life like nothing was wrong, I wanted to kill him,” Dougie said. “He’s gone again now but only after mum threatened to call the police if he didn’t stop harassing them.”

Dougie poured out the week’s worth of bottled emotions and Danny let him, knowing that Dougie needed to get this out of his system before he imploded. The blonde ranted and grew emotional for his sister and for himself for not being there to protect her. Danny understood, and just held Dougie’s hand tightly.

After a long while, Danny realised the time and they got up and walked back to their house together. Danny felt a lot better that Dougie talked to him. He didn’t press for details on the other thing that happened to Dougie as he knew his lover would talk about it when he was ready.

They made their way inside the house and Danny put the kettle on. He made them a hot chocolate each and they snuggled up together on the couch to watch a movie for the rest of the evening.


“No, no, no! That does not go there!”

Harry groaned and rubbed his eyes. “I will be glad when this is over and we are on our honeymoon,” he said and Danny chuckled.

Tom was ordering someone around and was getting pissed off from what Danny could see. Tom loved being in control and had a bit of a bossy streak so when it came to planning his own wedding, he was ten times worse than normal.

“It’s only two days away,” Danny reminded him. “Your rehearsal dinner is tonight and your wedding is tomorrow, just think this will all be over soon.”

Harry nodded. “I’m keeping that as my mantra,” he said seriously.

“No! I said no!” Tom’s voice rang out across the hall and Harry shut his eyes tightly.

“That is my cue to step in and save this wedding,” Harry said.

Danny shot him a sympathetic look and Harry left him for his annoyed fiancée. Danny finished setting the table in front of him and smiled as Dougie closed his mobile phone and approached him.

“That was Mike,” Dougie said.

Danny nodded. “You’ve been speaking to him a lot lately.”

“I know, he’s got me painting for a new client,” Dougie explained, ducking his head a little.

Danny went to ask him something but was interrupted by Dougie’s phone going off again and the blonde grinned broadly. “You’re here?” he asked as a greeting. “Excellent! No, no, we’ll be there in a few minutes.”

Danny raised an eyebrow curiously.

“Nah, he has no idea, too busy perfecting every last detail of his wedding,” Dougie chuckled and smiled. “Right, see you in a few then.”

Danny was about to open his mouth to ask who that was and Dougie grabbed his hand, dragging him out of the hall.

“Dougs?” he finally asked.

“James and Matt have arrived,” Dougie answered with a grin. “They’re at our house now.”

Danny smiled in realisation and they got in his car and they left the hall for their house. Minutes later, they pulled up outside of home and were greeted by James and Matt who grabbed them in massive hugs.

“Tom will be so glad you’re here,” Danny said to James. “He’s been fretting all week that you wouldn’t make it.”

James smiled. “I know,” he said. “We’ve been back in England for a couple of days now; we were visiting our family first.”

“How bad has he been then?” Matt asked.

“You don’t want to know,” Dougie said.

Danny nodded in agreement. “Remember when we were fifteen and he organised the charity raffle? Well, this is like that but a hundred times worse because it’s his wedding.”

“I always knew Tom was a woman trapped in a man’s body,” Matt joked.

“C’mon, let’s get back to the hall, I think Harry will need rescuing,” Danny said and they piled in his car.

“Where have you been?” Harry asked as Danny and Dougie re-entered the building.

“Picking up a gift for Tom, he might want to come outside for this,” Dougie grinned.

Harry called for Tom who huffed and came over to them.

“This better be good, they are trying to destroy my flower arrangement–” Tom trailed off as he saw James standing with Matt and he let out a very girlish squeal.

James laughed as Tom threw himself into his arms. The pair hugged and Harry visibly sagged in relief.

“When did you get in?” Tom demanded.

“Tom, don’t use your wedding ordering tone with friends,” Harry said lightly.

Tom flushed and said sorry before dragging James away to talk.

“Mate, you just saved my life,” Harry said slumping against Matt and they all chuckled.

James kept Tom from snapping at everyone that was helping out with the wedding and they went through the rehearsal dinner without a hitch.

After the dinner, Matt and James insisted they have a few drinks and a mini bachelor party for the engaged couple. All six males found themselves piled in the living room of Tom and Harry’s house with drinks in hand and music going in the background. James giggled as he recounted a moment from his and Matt’s trip where he was hit on by a massive tattooed male that liked ‘smaller men’ and how he and Matt pretty much ran from the lodge they were staying in after that.

Tom had relaxed considerably and Danny could tell that Harry was thankful for this. After a few drinks, James bounced in his seat and said he wanted to play truth or dare, claiming he wanted to relive their youth.

Tom happily agreed and said he would go first, asking Dougie truth or dare.

“Umm, dare,” Dougie said warily.

“I dare you to…” Tom pursed his lips in thought. “I dare you to eat a tablespoon of Harry’s marmite!”

“Hey, that’s my marmite!” Harry protested.

“A dare is a dare,” Tom giggled placing a kiss on Harry’s lips.

Dougie reluctantly ate the marmite and grimaced as he swallowed the substance. “That was gross,” he said wrinkling his nose in distaste.

He sat back down in their sloppy circle and he hiccupped. “Harry, truth or dare?”

Harry picked dare and Dougie dared him to give Matt a lap dance. Harry did so, reluctantly and sat back down. He looked at Danny and Danny picked truth as soon as he was asked the question.

“If you could fuck anyone in this room other than Dougie, who would it be and why?” Harry asked.

Danny bit his lip. “Probably you,” he said. “Because Tom is too much like my brother to do anything with otherwise I would have picked him. Plus, you’re a good kisser.”

Harry grinned at this and Danny turned to James and asked him the question.

“Dare,” James said confidentially.

“I dare you to serenade Tom,” he said.

“Lame,” Matt interjected. “Make it something worthwhile.”

“Fine, James, I dare you to kiss Tom like you kiss Matt,” Danny amended.

James nodded and shifted so he was in front of Tom who nervously licked his lips. James kissed him softly and then deepened it so they were kissing hotly. After a few long moments, James pulled back and moved to sit back next to Matt.

There was an awkward silence and James asked Harry truth or dare. Harry replied truth and the game slowly got back to normal.

They didn’t drink much more because they didn’t want to have headaches and feel sick for the next day. Tom cuddled up to Harry who kissed him tenderly and wrapped his arms around Tom’s waist.

“I’m glad you guys could make it,” Tom said sleepily from his position next to Harry.

James smiled. “Tom, we’re your and Harry’s groomsmen, like we would miss it,” he replied.

Tom smiled. “Thanks,” he said. He then sat upright and Harry asked what was wrong. “We’re getting married tomorrow,” was all he said.

Harry chuckled. “Yeah, we are,” he smiled.

“Actually married, that is so… wow,” Tom breathed.

Danny smiled. “It’s what you’ve always wanted, Tom,” he said.

Tom grinned. “I know,” he replied and kissed Harry. “We’re going to bed now,” he said standing.

After a few minutes of shuffling around, James and Matt made their way across the road to their own house and Dougie and Danny walked next door to theirs.

Danny stripped himself of his clothes and crawled under the bed covers. He yawned widely and Dougie settled in against him.

“I love you,” Danny whispered, pressing a kiss to Dougie’s lips.

Dougie kissed back hotly, wrapping himself around Danny fully. Danny moaned softly as Dougie settled on top of him, his hands coming to rest on his lover’s hips.

Dougie reached over to their bed side drawers and pulled out the tube of lubricant and a condom. He kissed Danny again and uncapped the lubricant. Danny automatically shifted his legs apart and Dougie shook his head.

“Wait,” he said against Danny’s mouth.

Dougie unwrapped the condom and rolled it onto Danny’s length and then coated it with lubricant. Danny moaned into their kiss when Dougie sat himself down on his erection. He held Dougie’s hips tightly, not wanting to hurt his lover by thrusting into him.

Once he was fully sheathed in Dougie, they both stilled. Danny looked up into Dougie’s eyes and Dougie smiled softly. He bent to kiss him and Danny thrust his hips upwards into Dougie. They let out a mutual moan and got a rhythm happening.

Not breaking their kiss, Danny sat up a little and traced a hand down Dougie’s chest, over the smooth skin. A light film of sweat formed, coating Dougie’s back and Danny’s hands slid easily down it. He thrust into Dougie at a steady pace and Dougie met each thrust with his own.

Danny groaned loudly when Dougie’s lips attached themselves to his neck and began to suckle lightly. He closed his eyes and tilted his head to allow Dougie more access and he shivered when the tongue lapped at his skin.

Danny leant back on one hand; the other coming to stroke Dougie’s leaking member. He stroked it in time with their thrusts, enjoying Dougie’s panting in his ear as he pulled away from his neck.

Dougie pressed their sweaty foreheads together and lightly kissed him. He bucked down on Danny’s cock and Danny moaned.

“Danny,” Dougie hissed. His muscles clamped around Danny’s erection as he came moments later and Danny kept his hand going as Dougie rode out his orgasm, his own following seconds later.

Dougie collapsed on top of him, a sticky, sweaty mess, breathing heavily. Danny pushed Dougie’s hair out of his face and kissed his lips softly whispering that he loved him over and over.


Comments are ♥
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ElieBel: rose10soolmates on April 20th, 2008 12:44 am (UTC)
I have the bad bad feeling Danny and Dougie won't make it and that's the big thing we all should hate you for at the end of book 2...
It's weird that Dougie didn't say 'I love you' back, he always says it back and what is this thing he doesn't talk about...
*settles camp and waits patiently for answers*
~*Star*~: DanDoug Guilty Pleasurestar55 on April 20th, 2008 12:56 am (UTC)
Hmmm you could be on the right track here...
But then you'll have to wait for the next few parts.

I'm glad you picked up on that actually, it's quite important. You're right, Dougie does always say "I love you" back.

*sets up camp with you*
l e x c e e b e e 。lostseouls on April 20th, 2008 12:55 am (UTC)
Dougie’s paints were at his feet.
i thought that said his pants
were at his feet.

idk, i'm just .. waiting for something
bad to happen yknow? it's a must in something
good. last book, it was nicola and this time
its .. ?

the last part kinda scared me... dougie's
acting really weird ):
~*Star*~: Danny & Dougie <3star55 on April 20th, 2008 01:20 am (UTC)
Oh lol. No, it's his paints.

You'll find out, don't worry, you'll find out.

Dougie is going through something and it's kind of tearing him apart...

Thank you for all your lovely comments!!

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12bear_hugs on April 20th, 2008 01:57 am (UTC)
poor Danny! I'm happy Dougie went to talk to him to work things out!

*slaps the stupid people who were rude to Danny & Harry*

LOL about Tom and his wedding! hehehe
~*Star*~: Harry & Tom Hottstar55 on April 20th, 2008 02:54 am (UTC)
It's not over yet... They're going to hit more bumps before things are better again.

*slaps them with you* I hate homophones!!

Lol. Tom is very particular about things and this is his wedding, so he's even worse than usual =P

bloommania1221bloommania1221 on April 20th, 2008 06:13 am (UTC)
OMGOSH I'm really worried right now for Dougie
I read someones comment saying Dougie isn't saying I love you back n that got me
man the suspense is killing me... oh man
But I bet Tom's wedding will be fun to read =]
~*Star*~: Danny & Dougie <3star55 on April 20th, 2008 06:53 am (UTC)

It is important that you noticed that Dougie didn't say 'I love you' back.
Like I said up there, Dougie is going through something - something a bit bigger than Justin coming back into town and it might not be a happy scenario.

Tom's wedding will be lovely =)

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a_glance_behinda_glance_behind on April 20th, 2008 07:33 am (UTC)
Nooooo... Noooo... you can't. Don't let their relationship falter.

You're doing that thing!! With throw away comments that look like they mean nothing.

“That was Mike,” Dougie said.

Danny nodded. “You’ve been speaking to him a lot lately.”

“I know, he’s got me painting for a new client,” Dougie explained, ducking his head a little.

Why does he duck his head??? I'm hoping it was just to check his phone and that it wasn't some kind of lying ducking of the head. -grumbles-

Nooo. I don't like secrets. And I don't like sadness. Gah. And the painting... things that are shattered are usually some kind of metaphor. Oh and the whole... not saying i love you thing. :S

You're killing me here. I feel all sad. :(:(:(:(

The story is still amazing though.

~*Star*~: Danny Dougie ILUstar55 on April 20th, 2008 07:42 am (UTC)

Dougie is keeping something from Danny and he thinks that Danny will be able to tell what it is if he looks at him. So he keeps his gaze away from Danny's at times like that.

Yeah, it's the metaphor for Dougie's breaking heart. He's torn between things and can't figure it out by himself.

Don't be sad, two chapters and an epilogue to go and you'll know the answers you seek ^_^

Thank you lovie.


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you clicked your heels and wished for me: Flones guitarsexphrida_91 on April 20th, 2008 09:41 am (UTC)
EE YAY! UPDATE!! *bounces happily*

But... You're having me really worried here. What's up with Dougs? :/

“I always knew Tom was a woman trapped in a man’s body,” HAHAHAH that had me snorting so loud :D

The suspense! The suspense! Now I REALLY can't wait for the update!!

~*Star*~: Danny & Dougie <3star55 on April 20th, 2008 09:44 am (UTC)
You'll just have to wait and find out =D
If I don't get too busy during the week, I'll post another part ^_^

Lol, I'm glad I made you laugh =D

Oohhh suspense is good though =)

Thanks for the lovely comment!!

oh_livia1 on April 20th, 2008 01:14 pm (UTC)
Update! Update!
*Happy dances*
Okay, this is really starting to scare me.
What's up with Douglas?!
What is it that he won't tell Daniel?!
Please let him be okay so he can keep on loving Danny and they have lots of little PoynterJones babies :(
On the other hand, I cannot begin to describe how much I love the idea of Stroppy!Tom organising his wedding.
Seriously him down to a point.
I agree with Matt too.
Tom Fletcher = Woman trapped inside a man's body.
~*Star*~: Danny Licking Dougie's Earstar55 on April 20th, 2008 09:48 pm (UTC)
Oooh you'll have to wait and see what is wrong with Dougie.

Lol. I loved writing stroppy!Tom =D he is just so fun =P

Tom is definitely a woman trapped in a man's body ^_^

Thanks for the comment!

liisemojliisemoj on April 20th, 2008 05:19 pm (UTC)
Woohoo! You updated it!
I'm happy for Harry and Tom, but man, what are you doing to Dougie and Danny? And here's me gone and pierced my lip as well to honour Dougie (ok, a joke, but lip is pierced), and then Dougie's being like that...

I love the update.. I reread "The Heart never lies" again, cause I was on my toes, waiting for an update! *shakes fish*
~*Star*~: Danny Dougie OTPstar55 on April 20th, 2008 09:51 pm (UTC)
Hmmm you'll have to wait and see!!
ooh ouch

Aww *blushes* thank you
Sorry, the week was a bad one
I hope to update on Wednesday!!

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wishfultales on April 20th, 2008 06:33 pm (UTC)
-spazzes majorly-

This is so amazingly brilliant! I absolutely love this!

You must forgive me, I haven't commented on any chapters previous because I've been really busy.

BUT NOW I shall comment because I love this so.

I have a nagging suspicion that something isn't going to go very well with Dougie and Danny. =/ Dougie didn't say 'I love you' back to Danny.



You have me in suspense, please update as soon as you can =D

~*Star*~: Danny Dougie Young Heartsstar55 on April 20th, 2008 09:52 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!!

Oohh you'll have to wait and see I'm afraid

Thanks for the comment!!
Rebecca.: Danny Forever In Your Eyesstolenglancesx on April 20th, 2008 07:32 pm (UTC)
yayay a new update!
i loved it.
im all happy yet im sad and scared and worried bout dougie..

only two chapters and an epilogue left.
im scared.
i know the ending is happy, but i cant help panicking!

i dont want anything bad to happen!!

-breathes deeply and tries to calm self-

~*Star*~: Danny I love Doug Triple Xstar55 on April 20th, 2008 10:03 pm (UTC)
Dougie is dealing with something and he's scared to let Danny know

The ending IS happy. The very end...

avehickey on April 22nd, 2008 04:52 am (UTC)
great add. i think maybe dougie's been unfaithful, or been raped or has been propositioned by this mike guy or something..

end our misery soon please :)
~*Star*~: Dougie - Will You Stand Bystar55 on April 22nd, 2008 08:52 am (UTC)
Thank you!

Ooh no, Dougie would never cheat on Danny. He's definitely not been raped and Mike doesn't want to have sex with Dougie, I can definitely tell you that now.

I shall post more soon ^_^

Sabrinabffimagine on April 23rd, 2008 01:51 am (UTC)
Oh jeez I'm terrified now

There's so much that isn't being said!AHHHHHHH!

~*Star*~star55 on April 23rd, 2008 03:51 am (UTC)
Don't be scared
No, wait DO =D
I'll post more tonight ^_^

leneebear: Pones. (OTP)leneebear on April 23rd, 2008 08:05 pm (UTC)
I don't like the impending doom... What's wrong with Dougie dammit??!!! Don't make Danny sad..!! It's a good thing I adore this story so much..!

And aww for Tom and his groomzilla-ness... Hehe new words are fun..!!

More please?
~*Star*~star55 on April 23rd, 2008 09:26 pm (UTC)
Ooh yes, the impending doom!
I forgot to post the next chapter when I got home last night from work, I will do it tonight!!

Lol. I love Tom ♥

mintondavies on April 24th, 2008 01:14 pm (UTC)
"Dougie’s paints were at his feet."
I thought that said pants when I first read it... oo-er.

Wow, I love this.
~*Star*~: Danny Hips Mmmm...star55 on April 24th, 2008 01:21 pm (UTC)
Lol, you're not the first one that thought that. Nope, not his pants =)

Thank you so much!!